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Pandamonium_
Pandamonium_Lv152yr
2023-02-13 01:38

Generally pretty enjoyable enough so that I paid for extra chapters. However I feel that the story and character falls to the wayside and becomes far less fleshed out when the relationship is introduced. It feels rushed like the author is trying to buff Hypnos’ partner to try and make her relative to him and likeable when we haven’t even grown attached enough to Hypnos himself by that point. It’s well written and definitely draws on some great imagery but overall I’m less into it as it feels forced to get the story to a point the author wants to write about. That being said I still did give the author my money so…

Percy Jackson : The Odyssey of a Primordial.

Eren_fraser
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Herohero
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very good fanfic I highly recommend it especially if you are a fan of mythology (the legend) and I hope to see this fanfic will be among the best on webnovel

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TinyBookDragon
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Reveal spoiler

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ChaMy
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I really like your Apollo story, and that's probably going to be amazing too. I'll hope to accumulate some chapters to read (google translator)

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Akito_
Akito_Lv14

The first three chapters have me excited about what is to come, I can't wait for more releases.

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Lima43
Lima43Lv4

Reveal spoiler

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hero4hire
hero4hireLv11

Feel like author watched sandman and deiced to write about it. Its like that meme where one friend copy another friend homework but does a poor job of hiding it. Good writing, bad story/plot.

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crinix
crinixLv14

It's an alright story, almost no grammar mistakes and world building and lore is quite good. But the personal turn down for me that make it unbearable for me to continue reading this story is romance, it was too fast and unrealistic and corniest thing I've ever read. If you can bear the unrealistic romance then go ahead read it, it is good.

2yr
SnowApathie
SnowApathieLv4

An other masterpiece from Eren_fraser. While for now there are only six chapter, its alredy awesome. This story is about a primordial something that has not really be done before. Long chapters with great development and as of now a really interesting plot. From what I have seen the mc seems to have the same personality as the one from his other stories (so wanting to be free, cold except for his close family and his lover. Intelligent and calculative). The story takes inspiration from Dream, with Hypnos creating the dreaming. Like always no grammatical nor typing error and many updates. This is a PJO ff but I have a question, is it also Marvel? because Hypnos said Hela and not Hel (her name in mythology). Overall a fantastic story to read if you like great ffs with character development and plot development and not everything always being repetitive and not wish-fuffilment. (Sheesh I wrote too many and but I don't have the motivation to change it lol. Hope this review helped.)

2yr
Li_Cangtian
Li_CangtianLv6

Everything was going quite well. Was. Writing quality is excellent, Story development is great (a little slow, but it does not really detract from the story), I can't really speak to the update frequency as I had just started reading so I left it as a 4 of 5, and the world background is really fantastic. what really lost me was the extremely forced romance between the Mc and Hera. It was... abrupt, jarring even. Personally, I dislike the pairing altogether, but that is not why I gave a 2 of 5 for character design. In my opinion, the whole interaction (which takes place between 2 chapters and a single party) was entirely forced and ruined any sort of prior character building for the Mc (in my opinion). The Mc was just recently described as extremely indifferent. Except, apparently, for the goddess of marriage, whom he quite literally just met and makes his little heart just flutter (she is literally a hot headed and brash character at the moment, who questioned his power infront of everyone, and is now somehow enraptured by him). It's a "love at first sight" type story (which I abhor and do not believe in). I stopped reading at the "as they drew closer to each other" part. If love at first instant is your sort of story, give it a read. everything else was great.

2yr
Xiphos_Gladius_03
Xiphos_Gladius_03Lv1

The concept of Hypnos being a primordial has me intrigued. The possibilities within the domain of sleep is diverse at its fundamental core and presents a vast endless possibilities.

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