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I really like your plot I hope you will update regularly and not drop it. And please go with whatever view you have for this novel just dont turn plot repetitive. Because I have seen many good novel turned into shit and boring because of its writer. And if you are using R18 tag use it well not just to show deeds only. Explore other dark parts of R18 genre most of writer dont explore it I hope you will at least try.
My point is that when you have power source why will you not work as villain you put a logic of gay but that cant prove your point because that is his sexual preference but here we want a clever person as villain who at least can use the resources he have rather than leaving everything to fate in attempt to save his life till post novel period. He is a total beta and this novels proves it in start so I dont think there is any point in reading it further because even author do his character development he can only put minute changes in his way of thinking.
Bro you are the only person I have seen who write villain character as villain not as hero I hope in future too you keep him as cunning as he is currently well he do need some character development but I like his character very much and thank you for chapter