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BenisBoy14
BenisBoy14Lv131yr
2023-04-04 06:57

26 chapters in and it's hard to read... The English is good and the pacing is good too, but it feels like it's hitting every single bad trope in a row. If the pacing wasn't as good, I'd have dropped it. The system is convoluted (colors, levels, aptitudes). The main way for MC to progress is by using magic (pokeblocks). MC is not an anti-hero. An anti-hero is still a hero, just with unconventional methods or motivation. MC is a murdering villain who hasn't done a good deed in 26 chapters. Killing intent is a thing here -.-

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JSK_Wilson
JSK_WilsonLv2

You're the only valid person in this whole reply section.

Tarantula_Paragon
Tarantula_ParagonLv5

Ins't this a copy of a copy of a fanfic? the middle one was good...

Daoist4AdNlS
Daoist4AdNlSLv3

Eso es lo que mas me gusta de esta historia

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