Review Detail of Thebossmhc in Inside an Incomplete Novel

Item: Inside an Incomplete Novel
Rating: 3

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ThebossmhcLv121yrThebossmhc

Read like 16 chapters, and these back stories are stupid af. The author is trying to make things tragic when it just feels forced. Another problem is how tf did Ruby get to the infirmary when the mc is supposedly meant to be op and some hidden power in the world and like i said before it feels forced to show how the mcs character is.

Inside an Incomplete Novel

Jinzi

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JinziAuthorJinzi

😭😂Uh, well, you're not wrong, but i can't make everything go smoothly 🗿. And, dude, who the heck finds logic in the lightnovel😂😭

1yr

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Jinzi:😭😂Uh, well, you're not wrong, but i can't make everything go smoothly 🗿. And, dude, who the heck finds logic in the lightnovel😂😭
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1yr