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The_ColIector
The_ColIectorLv41yr
2023-07-06 09:37

The story is amazing and all, but it’s all about Lunar. Like what’s so great about lunar? How does one get stronger with moon light and get weaker Witt sun light when they are basically the same thing? Unless Lunar is new concept of Darkness where he gets stronger with darkness, then this is just stupid. Lunar light is just a weaker, more pathetic version of the sun. This kind of bothers people who have knowledge of the laws of physics, not just me. It would’ve been cooler if it was void and not lunar.

I Maximize My Item-dropping Rate

Three Questions
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863 Chs

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MartiniSippinAngel
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Almost all cultivation novels are loosely based on bagua/trigrams, taoist system. In that system the moon light or lunar energy is not viewed through the modern scientific lens. The moon has metaphysical significance, associated with yin and represents various natural and supernatural forces.Although I find this novel bland, it is unfair to criticize the author for not basing the cultivation system on modern day astrophysics.

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