Review Detail of Dark_Thoughts in Worldwide Awakening: I Got Stronger If I Make Out With A Hot Girl

I thought this would be a light hearted comedy, but it’s not. Seems to be info dump stats and drops. Seems like newbie writer. He needs to work on pacing and scene development. Lack of transition and things happen way too fast without buildup. So pretty flat over all. Noticeable better vocabulary so might be original work instead of translation. Read some great works, imitate and then your scenes and transition will improve.