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Read a bit further on, Not really worthwhile. The author really likes to milk word count out of useless characters. What should take half a chapter to conclude, is extended 2-3 chapters. Gets kinda stale and pedantic. Also, MC thinks he’s smart, but because author isn’t smart, the actions and thoughts are completel illogical.
Not really worthwhile. The author really likes to milk word count out of useless characters. What should take half a chapter to conclude, is extended 2-3 chapters. Gets kinda stale and pedantic. Also, MC thinks he’s smart, but because author isn’t smart, the actions and thoughts are completel illogical.
I thought this would be a light hearted comedy, but it’s not. Seems to be info dump stats and drops. Seems like newbie writer. He needs to work on pacing and scene development. Lack of transition and things happen way too fast without buildup. So pretty flat over all. Noticeable better vocabulary so might be original work instead of translation. Read some great works, imitate and then your scenes and transition will improve.
This doesn’t look like translation. It’s more like English speaking newbie imitating the translated recent Immortal trend. It’s not bad, although the pacing and story development could use some practice. Seems a bit rushed and thrown in your face. No time to connect with the characters. He needs to analyze how some successful books pace their plot lines and imitate that until he’s ready to develope his own style.
I understand the century of humiliation and the atrocities of Japan during the Second World War. But it’s literally been decades and they can’t stop being butthurt in their literature. That’s just sad. No country is so blatantly xenophobic in their literature and entertainment. Most countries are still xenophobic here and there. Media can be especially polarizing, but entertainment should just be light fun. I’ve read American novels, Korean novels, Japanese novels, and Chinese novels. If it’s just a fantasy novel, they just build their world and ignore the foreign countries. Only Chinese novels explicitly mention foreigners in every novel to shit on them.
Don't bother reading further. After a certain point, it goes really hard into xenophobia. All foreigners are arrogant and evil. They are villains so it's ok to kill them all. Jesus. I get that there is some dark history, but at some point, you got to take the shit out of your ass, unless you want to be butthurt for eternity.
Don’t bother reading further. After a certain point, it goes really hard into xenophobia. All foreigners are arrogant and evil. They are villains so it’s ok to kill them all. Jesus. I get that there is some dark history, but at some point, you got to take the shit out of your ass, unless you want to be butthurt for eternity.
great novel so far. it's similar to the simulation genre but more down to earth and relatable. ................,...............................