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DetachedDreamer
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2023-01-24 07:57

Don't get many Food Wars fanfic so this rating of 5/5 is relative compared to others of the same story and not a reflection of its overall quality. Still the story is pretty awesome and his new life origin meshes very well. No having to create a family and feelings from scratch, it would of been forced unless he wanted a drawn out pre-canon info dump that lasted a lot more chapters. I like the chemistry between them and the impact hes already had on them and canon. he's not afraid to change the plot, even if its just minimal at this point. I like the system, and as long as it stays simple then ill be happy. His growth rate was a bit worrying but I think that now that he's entered canon it should develop at a more normal speed. I dont think he should be king after a year and beat his dad already. and as long as the MC doesn't get hypocritical in his thoughts or attitude then I'd say he's pretty awesome all around. Id love for him to be with Alice but ultimately I don't really mind. I would like it if he left erina for his bro tho lol. Grammar is above average and I can only hope he updates this story more often!

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there's other can you gimme the names?

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