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sebreddinLv141yr
2023-03-18 18:35

where's the RAWS when you need them

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shv_luffy98Lv5

it got deleted.. not only the comment.. the book itself you removed on qidian

sebreddinLv14

is it finished?

shv_luffy98:it got deleted.. not only the comment.. the book itself you removed on qidian
CyrsLv11

Nop, for what I find in the author note's, it was removed for plagiarism, I really don't understand and I couldn't found what are the big problem in any place.

sebreddin:is it finished?
SakuseiLv4

I don't even think he plagiarized anyone right? It'd be a stretch to say he copied someone wrote one about cultivating with his cellphone. Like, hello, someone literally ripped-off Earthlings Are Insane! and it wasn't taken down

Cyrs:Nop, for what I find in the author note's, it was removed for plagiarism, I really don't understand and I couldn't found what are the big problem in any place.
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D_WolfLv1

This one is very good. The title suggests another one of the stupid and absurd stories where the MC upgrades his computer into an ultimate ai aid for the cultivation world. Fortunately, the reality cannot be further from the truth. The MC starts out trying to upgrade his computer for a reasonable cost, only to be ignored by those he is seeking advice from. Closing out his query he suddenly transmigrates. He takes over the body of a guy who was killed because of an accidental peeking incident. He was expelled from his sect and then was killed by those who curried favor from those who expelled him. So upon finding himself transmigrated he finds that his computer components have come with him in the form of his talent and capacity for cultivation. CPU - cultivation speed as well as ability to process things. Memory - perception, hard drive - the sea of consciousness which includes his capacity for learning, graphics - his eyes and visual power and acuity, sound card - voice and sound power and acuity, network card - offers higher bandwidth for his 'computer' to acquire abilities. So his computer components were translated into being aspects of his potential for cultivation. He starts off with very little in the way of abilities as well as little space. Fortunately he can steel or download a copy of various types of information from various records. The method being his network card, which makes it undetectable at least so far. So he finds himself in a cultivator market and acquires a few techniques as well as some knowledge of alchemy from some alchemy books. Unfortunately he is just about out of space at that point so he upon finding his 'killers' he uses his newfound abilities to kill them. Getting his stuff back as well as plundering them, he finds that he can create some low level cultivation elixirs. From this he sells some and uses others. He acquires enough spirit stones to upgrade his hard drive so he can acquire some more abilities as well as knowledge. He gets himself into a higher level area of the market and acquires some good quality techniques and more knowledge. Then upon leaving he sees some demonic cultivators surrounding the market. He tries upgrading his graphics card and finds that he is able to see much more. Combat ensues and he is able to help one of his fellow cultivators who was good to him. The demonic cultivators are chased away and then he joins an alchemy sect as one of the elders has become interested in him. Before leaving he plunders some of the corpses and uses the resources to further upgrade his 'rig'. From this point we have a more standard type cultivation novel that is on par with some of the better works. Interspersed we have the MC continue to use his gimmick to wow those in his sect as well as grow both in power and talent. He helps out some fellow disciples and finally joins in on a joint mission where the local sects are working together to crack down on the demonic cultivators. The chapters of this story are not the word count limit chapters. Each one actually is worth reading as each furthers the story. As for the quality of the story, if it continues on like it has started I would very much love to read the whole story. There should not be the normal questionable concepts within so I do not see it devolving into something bad unless the author messed up later on.

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