Review Detail of LordGrimBlood in Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

i dont know about most of these criteria so they get three stars, but the grammar? The writing? Absolute garbage. Even 5 minutes of editing would save these chapters from the horrid writing. Like, i dont even care about repetitive wording so long as your sentence has proper structure, some flow to it. These do not flow. They barely even string together to mean anything. One or two typos and the whole paragraph loses any meaning.