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LordGrimBlood8mthCommentedCh 805 Worse Than Monsters- LordGrimBlood10mthPosted
i dont know about most of these criteria so they get three stars, but the grammar? The writing? Absolute garbage. Even 5 minutes of editing would save these chapters from the horrid writing. Like, i dont even care about repetitive wording so long as your sentence has proper structure, some flow to it. These do not flow. They barely even string together to mean anything. One or two typos and the whole paragraph loses any meaning.
detailErotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are VillainessesFantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer - LordGrimBlood1yrCommented
no NTR makes me a happy camper.
—|Author wishes no one to fear NTR! So he nerfed the world's men|— - LordGrimBlood1yrCommented
you keep saying she for guys instead of he, like Gere with murkatos husband.
Murkato couldn't believe what she was seeing. What right did she have to receive such emotions from her husband? Had she already forgotten the treatment she received from her? - LordGrimBlood1yrReplied to LordGrimBlood
teared is not a word. tore become torn in this case
The explosion occurred right in front of the young mage's hand. The force of the spell shoved it so hard it almost got teared off. That wasn't an understatement at all, as Murkato saw it sagging loosely by his side, the only thing keeping in place were some muscle and skin tissues. - LordGrimBlood1yrCommented
almost got TORN off.
The explosion occurred right in front of the young mage's hand. The force of the spell shoved it so hard it almost got teared off. That wasn't an understatement at all, as Murkato saw it sagging loosely by his side, the only thing keeping in place were some muscle and skin tissues. - LordGrimBlood1yrCommented
"He possesses almost no avenues aside from the legal ones," would be the right sentence, no?
"He possesses almost no aside from the legal ones," Eliseline sighed. "After our loss in the civil war, he had forced many of the nobles to pay an absurd amount of money to him as part of the reparations. After all, most of the nobles were the Grand Duchess's people. He planned to get them to his side a bit later, but Marquis Wallace stole his chance. - LordGrimBlood1yrCommented
Just gotta play some chainmail. You know, D&D's predecessor? Pretty sure that is what it is called.
The gifts of the nobles were quite varied. Aside from the silk rolls, laces, shoes and hats; there were a couple books, a horse, a carriage, and finally, a masterfully crafted strategic board game involving military tactics that included miniature castles, siege weapons, and mages. - LordGrimBlood2yrCommented
I gotta say. I get that Aurelia doesn't see them as anything more than snakes, but her and Sensei, and everyone else's inability to speak to each other in any way shape or form without leaving out ALL the details is infuriating. and letting fairy-girl be your translator? What sorta idiot let's a person they suspect of being bad at communicating do the talking for their subordinates?
Ch 175 Ophelia's Herald