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I already read it, I didn't like it hahaha. I am very picky about fanfics and details and during my reading it was impossible to ignore the plot holes. The romance is too rushed and feels fake, like the author hasn't talked to a girl in his whole life 😅😅, it's really bad to be honest. The MC makes a lot of mistakes that I think a normal person wouldn't make, they could be rookie mistakes but here they are quite forced in some situations (not all). The story is a meh, the power progress is "quick" at first and then I feel like it stagnates and gets really slow and boring in my opinion. The characters act too much like NPCs, their attitudes and actions are erratic all the time, in Little Red Riding Hood the grandmother was strangely perceptive, in Harry Potter they all act in a "modern" way, I don't know if I understand myself, it's strange knowing that they are in 1990 and not in 2023 xd like us. Certainly this book needs a lot of polish to reach its maximum splendor, there are many things that I personally would change, for example the class 2 and 3 that the MC chose, they are basically useless 😅😅. In conclusion, I will wait for a possible rewrite if the author ever does. If I had to give a rating I would say 5.5/10 what this author does well is give details that are not normally provided by other authors, although sometimes there is too much unnecessary details 👍👍👍
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Yesss romance is to fast !!!! He can just go around and go wild with no harem but he chose oc to be with him likeee whattttt.... i just like the story and world he gonna visit
Gabichu_Yeah:I already read it, I didn't like it hahaha. I am very picky about fanfics and details and during my reading it was impossible to ignore the plot holes. The romance is too rushed and feels fake, like the author hasn't talked to a girl in his whole life 😅😅, it's really bad to be honest. The MC makes a lot of mistakes that I think a normal person wouldn't make, they could be rookie mistakes but here they are quite forced in some situations (not all). The story is a meh, the power progress is "quick" at first and then I feel like it stagnates and gets really slow and boring in my opinion. The characters act too much like NPCs, their attitudes and actions are erratic all the time, in Little Red Riding Hood the grandmother was strangely perceptive, in Harry Potter they all act in a "modern" way, I don't know if I understand myself, it's strange knowing that they are in 1990 and not in 2023 xd like us. Certainly this book needs a lot of polish to reach its maximum splendor, there are many things that I personally would change, for example the class 2 and 3 that the MC chose, they are basically useless 😅😅. In conclusion, I will wait for a possible rewrite if the author ever does. If I had to give a rating I would say 5.5/10 what this author does well is give details that are not normally provided by other authors, although sometimes there is too much unnecessary details 👍👍👍
the beginning was nice, fast but easy, but in harry potter everything got too fast and gave me a feeling of incongruity xd
al_tempt:Yesss romance is to fast !!!! He can just go around and go wild with no harem but he chose oc to be with him likeee whattttt.... i just like the story and world he gonna visit
al_tempt:Yesss romance is to fast !!!! He can just go around and go wild with no harem but he chose oc to be with him likeee whattttt.... i just like the story and world he gonna visit
