Review Detail of MR_AtulTiwari in The Knight and the Apocalypse: A Second Chance at Life
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Keep it up, It's one of best storyđđ writing character development, and world development, I have ever readI have also read Tyrant of steel , Restart;Untalented man and other kingdom building masterpieces but the plot armor seem tospoils the story, but not in this story so please continue the stories, and continue to give us regular chaptee
The Knight and the Apocalypse: A Second Chance at Life
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Bro I commented the above around 30 chapter, the development is good but the are some issue, Bro I some time think that mc uncle feels like mcđ¤, there is no emotional development for mc he act in the same way he acted in 1 chapterNo offence but shouldn't be well vera in politics or any other field considering his past life
themusicaddict:i intend to do so, i will be returning home tomorrow, my train leaves tonight, so o should be able to start wrkitingagain pretty soon
not really, do you think a normal soldier would be well versed in politics? john after getting kicked out of the royal palace had to climb the tanks as a regular soldier and in a meritocratic society the military doesn't require politics. and yeah I'm well aware that I have focused a lot of time on Dante, which will stop happening pretty soon, it is just that at the time I did not feel that john was a major player and didn't focus on him is all, John is and will be the MC.
MR_AtulTiwari:Bro I commented the above around 30 chapter, the development is good but the are some issue, Bro I some time think that mc uncle feels like mcđ¤, there is no emotional development for mc he act in the same way he acted in 1 chapterNo offence but shouldn't be well vera in politics or any other field considering his past life