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MR_AtulTiwari

MR_AtulTiwari

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  • MR_AtulTiwari
    MR_AtulTiwari2 years ago
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    Bro are going to make in future? And are you going to show Dragons in it?

    This book has been deleted.
  • MR_AtulTiwari
    MR_AtulTiwari3 years ago
    Replied to themusicaddict

    Bro I commented the above around 30 chapter, the development is good but the are some issue, Bro I some time think that mc uncle feels like mc😤, there is no emotional development for mc he act in the same way he acted in 1 chapterNo offence but shouldn't be well vera in politics or any other field considering his past life

  • MR_AtulTiwari
    MR_AtulTiwari3 years ago
    Posted

    Keep it up, It's one of best story😍😍 writing character development, and world development, I have ever readI have also read Tyrant of steel , Restart;Untalented man and other kingdom building masterpieces but the plot armor seem tospoils the story, but not in this story so please continue the stories, and continue to give us regular chaptee

  • MR_AtulTiwari
    MR_AtulTiwari3 years ago
    Posted

    WELL BUDDY I ONLY HOPE YOU WON'T DROP THIS . THE ONLY ISSUE IS UPDATES. I PERSONALLY LIKE THE OPEN WORLD ENVIRONMENT, IT'S ALL DEPENDS ON AUTHOR IMAGINATION ,SO IT HAS VEERY GOOD START AND PLEASE DON'T DROP IT WITH ANY REASON KEEP THE CULTURE GOING