pretty good, don't gotta worry about chatgpt it's overall not a problem plus it's one of the few rainworld fics we'll made if I do say so myself

Cat litter tier fanfic because of inclusion of a system .

My first rain world fanfic that I found.

This has major potential to be a very good book.

It's compelling and I like how the story is going. Keep it up mate!

I have only read the first three chapters so take this review with a grain of salt. The writing quality has no instantly noticeable flaws but lacks details about the protagonists surroundings this is very important especially in an environment such as Rain World. I do find the description of our main character lacking, without a pool of water or a mirror the readers should at least be provided with a body shape and colors to help readers minds fill in the blanks that any written text may not have. I do know how slug cats look but with the verities of them suck was Gourmand and Saint The story itself (especially with the sudden pace change with the blue lizard) stays fluently Chaotic. with how the world of Rain world operates this is quite pleasant. This kind of writing perfectly follows the game itself. Constantly changes from eating little bugs one second to getting drowned by a red eyed pole, this is what I hope won't change too much during this story. Thx for reading. -Blipbug Lover

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Wow this is really great! Look forward to more, and pls don't drop.

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