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CryoTear
CryoTearLv131yr
2023-09-09 06:32

pretty good, don't gotta worry about chatgpt it's overall not a problem plus it's one of the few rainworld fics we'll made if I do say so myself

Rain World: The Knight

chaoticCatholic
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43 Chs

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Arcanistis
ArcanistisLv2

I'll just rate the author for being a connoisseur of good games ...................................................................................

1yr

Arkonin
ArkoninLv15

Cat litter tier fanfic because of inclusion of a system .

1yr
Sakires_2
Sakires_2Lv1

My first rain world fanfic that I found.

1yr
Hinto_Wolf
Hinto_WolfLv4

This has major potential to be a very good book.

1yr
LateNightWatcher
LateNightWatcherLv4

It's compelling and I like how the story is going. Keep it up mate!

1yr
weedle_enthusiast
weedle_enthusiastLv2

I have only read the first three chapters so take this review with a grain of salt. The writing quality has no instantly noticeable flaws but lacks details about the protagonists surroundings this is very important especially in an environment such as Rain World. I do find the description of our main character lacking, without a pool of water or a mirror the readers should at least be provided with a body shape and colors to help readers minds fill in the blanks that any written text may not have. I do know how slug cats look but with the verities of them suck was Gourmand and Saint The story itself (especially with the sudden pace change with the blue lizard) stays fluently Chaotic. with how the world of Rain world operates this is quite pleasant. This kind of writing perfectly follows the game itself. Constantly changes from eating little bugs one second to getting drowned by a red eyed pole, this is what I hope won't change too much during this story. Thx for reading. -Blipbug Lover

1yr
Lorran_Souza
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TheWaffleMonarch
TheWaffleMonarchLv4

Wow this is really great! Look forward to more, and pls don't drop.

1yr
DaGai
DaGaiLv4

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