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ManEatingTurtle
ManEatingTurtleLv31yr
2023-03-02 07:19

I've just started reading your novel (c18) and I think it has an amazing potential! I like how the beginning was unexpected, and the fact that the author doesn't give that much information about the story only just enough you don't get lost. He also adds these little teasers about the background of the main character that makes you think "wonder how that happened", and motivate you to read the story. It is also good that even though this is an OP protag novel, it doesn't feel like he got too powerful too fast, but instead that he struggles to accomplish his feats and develops slowly but surely (still OP though). Overall great novel so far and I'll probably edit this review as I move forward in the novel. Anyway, best of luck, author, and good work!

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ManEatingTurtle
ManEatingTurtleLv3

How do I edit it anyway? (Just realised a grammar error... Haha...)

HideousGrain
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Thank you. Glad you like it :D

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