ManEatingTurtle

It's a fantasy, no need for reality, it's fine if it seems cool

SAME! 🤣🤣

Death flag right here, hers, I mean

No you are not.

This guy was the first thing that came to mind...

Dude... Grammar... Anyways, good going, slightly predictable, but entertaining. I hope you focus more on the dungeon itself that the rest of the game, you're the dungeon master, not the strongest sword deity (if you get what I mean)

Seems your grammar got worse? How? That aside, didn't quite like the fact that he waited around for an hour... I mean, he can't be naive enough to think coming back would only happen to him, or idiot enough to think that a guy on a street stall would only put the rock for sale JUST BEFORE he got there... Now that I said what I don't like, I must say that I enjoyed that he will get a new start and that you didn't even mention his previous class (not yet anyway). Btw, the class system is nice.

Okay, pretty standard start, mess, failure, betrayal, reborn. It's not good or bad, it is what it is, what matters is what's next. As for grammar, you show little mistakes, which is good, but don't get complacent and keep improving. Also "mins" is fine, so it's not a critic, but if it were me I'd stick with minutes. Overall I got a nice impression, let's see how it goes!

Oh, I'm actually not. There's a bunch of them already! I feel sad... and strangely proud...

OMG, can't believe I'm the first to think this