Reading this story, it's obvious that the only thing the author had in mind when writing it was gore. No substance, only violence. Lacks any real creative writing, and the target audience for this would be edgy 13 year olds. The story is boring and messy, and the grammar is decent. Background had potential but screwed up by funky writing. Characters all suck, and MC is basically a serial killers wet dream and has no real value/ characterization besides being an edgy person who likes to do messed up stuff. The writing of morals in general in this story is so incredibly inconsistent and overall this just sucks. If you want a story with substance, dont bother with this.
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at only what chapter 43... you judge too soon. also, it's called devil's slave ...and it takes place In a world 50 yrs after demons and devils have brought the apocalypse... only divine ignorance will make you believe such a world will be innocent... if you want to see story, read and find out the secrets as you go... else, leave.
you little kid. this gore very good! many blod and so yes. you always say so every i see you. go buy life!
I strongly stand by what i said. I understand the setting isn't a happy place, and far from it, it is pretty sinister. But this isn't real writing. All this gore is stuffed in for the sake of having it. And if by chapter 43 you still say that "you're judging too soon," it's on the author. It's like starting to watch a show that spans hundreds of hours, and it only gets good during the latter half. If it takes that long for it to be good, it simply isn't. I like grim stories, but this was a mess. There is no real point to it and a massive disappointment and a waste of time. Plenty of stories have a lot of gore without it feeling unnecessary. The thing all of those had was good writing and explanations for it besides "its a grim world," which this simply doesn't have. Boring waste of time, and even after 5 months, im still pissed i ever gave it a chance in the first place. The only reason im replying is because i just saw the notification.
