Azakinu

Turned a great novel into a generic slop comic. Wouldnt recommend this to anyone, should read the novel instead.

First of all, im just giving my thoughts on the novel. In no way am i trying to be rude towards the author. Im just giving my criticism and thoughts on the novel so far. I like the premise, the overall worldbuilding, and the characters. But honestly, it's a miss for me. Pacing needs major work (how am i on chapter 40 when we could've reached this point in the story by chapter 10-15). I feel like the author likes to overexplain things, and it takes away from the experience. Lots of info dumps early on that could've been explained later, and i feel like it wasn't handled that well. At some point i got a headache purely because of how often the author used the term "soul" in a single chapter. I think the puns are funny but overdone, and the 4th wall breaking feels.. unnecessary. I really do like the overall premise and characters, but i feel like the writing needs a lot of work.

Its pretty common where i live and was born. Its even used on certain traffic signs to indicate maximum load allowed of certain vehicles on certain roads or bridges

I dont mind the big words as its a nice way to sharpen up my english, but i can see it being annoying for some other readers.

its different if you die and get transmigrated. Then you can more easily accept it since not doing so would just be death

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Not all but i assume the vast majority yes

depends on alot of factors. Im guessing she learnt some standup and wrestling, maybe muay thai and wrestling combined. BJJ is important but i dont know if every gym trains it from the first go

so far his intelligence seems sub-par at best. You dont become an NBA player by shooting a single basket, it takes alot of work.