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Lord_Sleepless_
Lord_Sleepless_Lv310mth
2024-01-17 11:41

I'm far too lazy to write a remotely good review at all so I'm just giving 5 stars to show the author that I love the book, I also, love watching Lenny get through insane predicaments I love the macabre acts and scenes within the book, I love how you(the author) progressed in writing skills, you went from a decent, novice writer to being able to pull me into your book like it was real stuff, a word of advice tho, please please lower the amount of words used to describe things in the current chapters, no offense as of rn most of the chapters words are descriptions for 1-2 attacks, I would keep rambling but I don't wanna seem like a jerk, but peace author, love the book yo

Devil Slave (Satan system)

Dere_Isaac
4.5
1219 Chs

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1_G_5324
1_G_5324Lv2

Good critique, too bad authors only respond to positive comments...hence no changes. Awesome book tho.

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Dere_Isaac
Dere_IsaacAuthor

I had always wondered what it would be like if a murderer or a bad guy was reincarnated and not a shut in otaku. After all, they are both good and bad Gods or in this case, Devil...😈

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dreamy_charcoal
dreamy_charcoalLv3

this is one of the best novel it has amazing plot and has such a vast power system mc is villain with some wierd code of conducts it's awesome everything is exciting idk why this thing isn't on trending also why just 1M it deserves far more than that

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ArkonKnight
ArkonKnightLv3

It’s definitely a good novel I love the way it starts off, it reminds me of your other book in my bloody hit novel all in all great book love the mc and I have nothing but gratitude for you writing this.

1yr
RasenganMaster
RasenganMasterLv12

This novel is amazing!!! ..... ........... .................... ............................ .......................................... ....................................................

1yr
Zurbluris
ZurblurisLv13

Nice to see another author from Nigeria 😎

1yr
JanDarkv1
JanDarkv1Lv3

I have read up to chapter 560 and I can say the following:1) Don't start if you don't like blood and gore.2) The author works really hard to write the book, have you ever seen a writer studying biology for scenes of blood and gore?3) The character is intelligent and capable, just a bit stupid in discovering the system's capabilities.4) The only thing missing is little or no side character descriptions.Note: Sometimes we forget what the characters look like, so sometimes they could be reminded in the form of little reminders or a special section explaining character appearances could be published.5) In short, it is a book that has been given a good effort, you will not regret reading it.

1yr
Kobeni_GOD
Kobeni_GODLv10

*Story Potential 7.8/10 *Power system potential 8.1/10 *Potential mc 7/10 *Mc Madness 6.7/10 =Personal preference= *(I have read up to chapter 42 and the mc seems to want to help humanity in a twisted way but it is still helping, "potential for possible poison evil antihero savior of humanity indirectly") *Currently he is like a worshiper of Lucifer, he idolizes him and wants to fulfill his mandate, I don't like that but it's passable, what I absolutely dislike is the ideology of the mc, and wanting to save humanity, the author really likes the theme of the demonic and madness but indifference and transcendence are also attractive traits for the mc, I recommend reading "The Path of Omniscience"

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