I am a newbie author and its my first novel. I hope you guys call out my mistakes and we can perfect this story together.
If you have any tropes or events you want me to add or any loopholes you find in the story do tell me.
Bye
Have fun reading <3
And pls read the end of story summary.
Umm i don't know if it will count as a spoiler or not but its a single female lead.
Radpiplup:harem or single female lead??
Gaurav_YTLv3
yeah I like it author make heroine beautiful 😍 👌
Raos_IOI:Umm i don't know if it will count as a spoiler or not but its a single female lead.
Ashborn1609Lv4
time to read this one
Raos_IOI:Umm i don't know if it will count as a spoiler or not but its a single female lead.
Ashborn1609Lv4
also which one of your novel should I give power stone
this one or the other
they are the same🤔
Raos_IOIAuthor
I have entered this one for the fantasy carnival so if you want to support using power stones, use on this one.
Ashborn1609:also which one of your novel should I give power stone
this one or the other
they are the same🤔
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Dark_night1Lv4
New author? Ur amazing bro continue this novel and don't drop it please, it's entertaining to read one so continue doing what you've been doing and good luck
Raos_IOI:I have entered this one for the fantasy carnival so if you want to support using power stones, use on this one.
Azathoth2Lv4
Raos_IOI:Umm i don't know if it will count as a spoiler or not but its a single female lead.
LuciFer_KardamLv4
So, does that mean there's no harem?
Raos_IOI:Umm i don't know if it will count as a spoiler or not but its a single female lead.
Raos_IOIAuthor
Yes
LuciFer_Kardam:So, does that mean there's no harem?
Faith_OssaiLv15
please update more chapters....i really love this novel..the suspense is killing me..thankssss
Don_NyxLv4
Congrats author today is the day you achieved a million views you should be proud of your work and i am really happy for you as i am someone who has been reading this novel from the start but i never knew i will be Hooked into this novel
Raos_IOIAuthor
Don_Nyx:Congrats author today is the day you achieved a million views you should be proud of your work and i am really happy for you as i am someone who has been reading this novel from the start but i never knew i will be Hooked into this novel
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EternalCodexLv4
Keep up the good work author.
I'm afraid I can't support you at the moment (because I'm a student) but it won't remain the same in the future.
At that time I will support you wholeheartedly.
MoonRainLv4
when will the fl appear?
DaoistmPhOfbLv12
well this is going to be my first review on a novel as I really loved the concept and theme of this novel, though I genuinely think that the MC's personality can be improved a bit as he is way to dark and way to negative I mean would he actually improve his personality in the future or not????
as I really liked this a lot
DaoistmPhOfbLv12
she has already appeared
MoonRain:when will the fl appear?
Good_Morning_6215Lv3
who is fl
Unpaid_Landlord16Lv13
Story is good, characters are developing nicely and mc's character is my favourate. Just want 2 chapters a day if possible.