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Moody_Melody
Moody_MelodyLv11yr
2023-01-19 13:24

I just don’t like the fact that a mentally 30 or so year-old, lusted over a 18-year-old. And also the possessiveness just remind me of wattpad, it’s cringe. Also, can the main harem be from the New World? Having real actual people just… don’t feel really comfortable.

Overlord: The True God Kin

AzazelGrim
3.6
19 Chs

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Moody_Melody
Moody_MelodyLv1

The New World should be happening in the 20s as anything else, I will be die.

1yr
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CruelReality
CruelRealityLv4

Like many novels, there is great potential here but is ruined by a brainless MC and insufferable and cliche female characters. He reincarnates with a cliche hot genius brocon older sister that has all the personality of a piece of rotting driftwood. Instantly becomes obsessed with her and reading their interactions is incredibly cringe enduring due to how over the top and cliche they are. The MC is also an uncreative moron simply skirting by on privilege. Does not think outside the box at all, once example of this is the system gave him 3.8 billion dollars which he didn’t even think to use intelligently. Worst of all, because his sister apparently couldn’t take a few hours a day away from him he gave up the unique advantage of starting ygdrassil in Beta. That was the last straw for me, and I cannot recommend this to anyone with an IQ above room temperature unless you have an EX tier resistance to clichés, cringe, and stupidity.

1yr

It_Does_Matters
It_Does_MattersLv5

Reveal spoiler

1yr
JoSauer
JoSauerLv14

Only for those realy desperate for an Overlord ff. Its a mess

1yr
The_Key
The_KeyLv1

okay, for me, this seems to not have a real script, just one idea that the author probably change after some caps,.. I would really like to read this story, but because it's a harem, and the author is simply giving infinite powers to the protagonist, it certainly has no future.. I hope I'm wrong though.

1yr
Mr_Carelessnss
Mr_CarelessnssLv3

I love overpowered characters. You gave me a middle finger through making the character have smol brain and being a bad cheater. If this was reality, he would have been permanently banned from YGGDRASIL along with his other accounts.

1yr
WeiFuUwU
WeiFuUwULv10

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Drako_0692
Drako_0692Lv1

basic story not worth it the beginning is the most over exploited and stupid, a checked system that breaks any logic, garbage, an irreplaceable sister and an intelligence of a primary school child

1yr
Zenade_Hussain
Zenade_HussainLv4

hope you update more ..................

1yr
VersusLily
VersusLilyLv14

I’m enjoying this a lot! I saw some people complaining about the character being OP, but this is the world of Overlord it’s intertwined with the meaning of being Overpowered. I hope you continue to update author!

1yr
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