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The_Key
The_KeyLv12yr
2023-01-03 07:37

okay, for me, this seems to not have a real script, just one idea that the author probably change after some caps,.. I would really like to read this story, but because it's a harem, and the author is simply giving infinite powers to the protagonist, it certainly has no future.. I hope I'm wrong though.

Overlord: The True God Kin

AzazelGrim
3.6
19 Chs

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AzazelGrim
AzazelGrimAuthor

I'm not giving him infinity power. I won't say anything, but there will be challenges even if he gets infinitely strong and the story will actually start when they go to the new world. and it's an overlord fanfic for god's sake! I know the start is rough, but I'm trying to do my best to write a good fanfic. anyway, thanks for the review. even if it's not good, it gives me more motivation to write better.

2yr
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The_Key
The_KeyLv1

i think it's just not for me, u know. good luck in your journey

AzazelGrim:I'm not giving him infinity power. I won't say anything, but there will be challenges even if he gets infinitely strong and the story will actually start when they go to the new world. and it's an overlord fanfic for god's sake! I know the start is rough, but I'm trying to do my best to write a good fanfic. anyway, thanks for the review. even if it's not good, it gives me more motivation to write better.
2yr
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CruelReality
CruelRealityLv4

Like many novels, there is great potential here but is ruined by a brainless MC and insufferable and cliche female characters. He reincarnates with a cliche hot genius brocon older sister that has all the personality of a piece of rotting driftwood. Instantly becomes obsessed with her and reading their interactions is incredibly cringe enduring due to how over the top and cliche they are. The MC is also an uncreative moron simply skirting by on privilege. Does not think outside the box at all, once example of this is the system gave him 3.8 billion dollars which he didn’t even think to use intelligently. Worst of all, because his sister apparently couldn’t take a few hours a day away from him he gave up the unique advantage of starting ygdrassil in Beta. That was the last straw for me, and I cannot recommend this to anyone with an IQ above room temperature unless you have an EX tier resistance to clichés, cringe, and stupidity.

2yr

It_Does_Matters
It_Does_MattersLv5

Reveal spoiler

2yr
JoSauer
JoSauerLv14

Only for those realy desperate for an Overlord ff. Its a mess

2yr
Mr_Carelessnss
Mr_CarelessnssLv3

I love overpowered characters. You gave me a middle finger through making the character have smol brain and being a bad cheater. If this was reality, he would have been permanently banned from YGGDRASIL along with his other accounts.

2yr
Moody_Melody
Moody_MelodyLv1

I just don’t like the fact that a mentally 30 or so year-old, lusted over a 18-year-old. And also the possessiveness just remind me of wattpad, it’s cringe. Also, can the main harem be from the New World? Having real actual people just… don’t feel really comfortable.

2yr
WeiFuUwU
WeiFuUwULv10

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Drako_0692
Drako_0692Lv1

basic story not worth it the beginning is the most over exploited and stupid, a checked system that breaks any logic, garbage, an irreplaceable sister and an intelligence of a primary school child

1yr
Zenade_Hussain
Zenade_HussainLv4

hope you update more ..................

2yr
VersusLily
VersusLilyLv14

I’m enjoying this a lot! I saw some people complaining about the character being OP, but this is the world of Overlord it’s intertwined with the meaning of being Overpowered. I hope you continue to update author!

2yr
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