Review Detail of Cody_Bowen in Lord of magic

sorry for your experience. But from later I will try to make big chapter

Now I had merge the chapters

No, i want to apologize for my review. it was needlessly harsh. Yes the chapters were small and yes the grammar needed addressing, but i should not have been so callous and unforgiving to an author trying their best. If you want I can delete this comment so future readers can make their own assessments on your new and improved work.