Review Detail of The_Puffer in A Bizarre & Anomalous Adventure in the SCP Foundation
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At first chapters, everything is quite bad. But I like to think that is because the author is New. (Artemis is author's friend Who published his story for him.) the story get better as the time goes especially after chapter 30 or so. The only problem is that because the characters were introduced to us in a bad way, we cant seem to really 'connect' with the characters if you know what I mean. And all the New added characters doesnt helps the situation either. I know how it feels. For New authors, its like devil whisper ing in your ear. Its your story, where you can literally create universes and add anything you like. But that is a huge mistake because of all the background stuff you gotta do. As a person Who read the entire first arc, I can say that in the recent chapters, everything is quite good quality. But as I Said with my rating in the end of the arc, it currently lacks the push to make the readers go further and read more and wonder what is going to happen in the next chapter. If you can handle some low iq and overly emotional moments in the first chapters, this is not so bad fic. So I suggest for People Who can push through Hardships to read it. I can finish a 150 chapter story in 2 days without breaking a sweat but this took me weeks. Finally done my part. o7
A Bizarre & Anomalous Adventure in the SCP Foundation
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PalpatineDewIt66:Nobody cares and the fact you took weeks is because your not interested in these types of books or MC's...i wouldn't surprised if half your reading time is on giga chad or op MC's or non unique books or books lacking realistic emotional driven type MC's.... or better yet harem.image
>Check the all comments >Only this fanfic Alr OP stop with making alts and using them to seethe you’re fooling no one
PalpatineDewIt66:Nobody cares and the fact you took weeks is because your not interested in these types of books or MC's...i wouldn't surprised if half your reading time is on giga chad or op MC's or non unique books or books lacking realistic emotional driven type MC's.... or better yet harem.image
Magos_Dominus_8298:>Check the all comments >Only this fanfic Alr OP stop with making alts and using them to seethe you’re fooling no one
PalpatineDewIt66:Palpatine: >:/ Are you questioning my opinion Master Reader ?
PalpatineDewIt66:Palpatine: >:/ Are you questioning my opinion Master Reader ?
palpatine: :/ -_- Very well but it's still a shame they treat the book like this master Artemis. I thought webnovel readers are more respectful.
Artemis099:Dude, don't be disrespectful, I know you like this story but don't be an •sshole about it
PalpatineDewIt66:palpatine: :/ -_- Very well but it's still a shame they treat the book like this master Artemis. I thought webnovel readers are more respectful.
Artemis099:this is a version of tweeter where people loves quality over quantity
I think romance refers to others around mc. Not the mc. Because I didnt see any proper relationship with mc in first arc
Kurama24:In the tags it says there's romance, did Mc get a LI later on or nah (currently I'm at 9 tailed fox chap) and if yes who is it
The_Puffer:I think romance refers to others around mc. Not the mc. Because I didnt see any proper relationship with mc in first arc
spoiler alert, there is for the mc, which only appear in the end of the second arc... which wasn't made yet... not even close
The_Puffer:I think romance refers to others around mc. Not the mc. Because I didnt see any proper relationship with mc in first arc
I will make a deal with you artemis. I will read 2 chapters of this book per 1 chapter you release on synthetic survivor
Artemis099:spoiler alert, there is for the mc, which only appear in the end of the second arc... which wasn't made yet... not even close
The_Puffer:I will make a deal with you artemis. I will read 2 chapters of this book per 1 chapter you release on synthetic survivor
I will, but what about 3 or 5 chapters? And I will will be published it. LIKE this comment if you agreed then the deal is on
The_Puffer:I will make a deal with you artemis. I will read 2 chapters of this book per 1 chapter you release on synthetic survivor
The_Puffer:I will make a deal with you artemis. I will read 2 chapters of this book per 1 chapter you release on synthetic survivor
i already have 3 draft chapters for synthetic survivor. Read 9 chapters and I'll published 3 at once
The_Puffer:I will make a deal with you artemis. I will read 2 chapters of this book per 1 chapter you release on synthetic survivor