You didnt read much of the story, I have read all the chapters, not only the MC has improve, even the comedy and the writing quality has becoming good!

You're right, man. It took me a whole month to read all of the chapters. And I hope you read Arc 2 because it gets interestjng anf the writing quality gets good

The story and the plot is good. But chapters below 15 are not that good, the cringe drama is kinda unbearable to read, especially the MC is like a manchild, but once you continue to read further, things get interesting and the MC becoming more mature and the development to the way he is is kinda harsh for him. I have read this story for a whole month till to Chapter 170, and i love it Writing quality doesnt seem good at the beginning, but it improves as time goes by. So, in other words, this story has many flaws, the beginning isnt good but the late events of the story is a masterpiece of crossover fanfictions I have ever read So READ IT!

Let me guess...King crimson

Not bad, not bad at all. I get the world background and the characters. The writing quality was a bit good. Do a good job. I like the Overpower mc can manipulate time.1

Uhhh, i wish this will be a hentai novel :(