Review Detail of Ased in Multiversal: The Shop
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Well, I'm really sorry about your dad, but that doesn't change my opinion... Fanfic. All the action in the store is the same (when a new customer shows up). Also, I don't remember exactly because it's been a long time since I read it, but I definitely remember the problem with the MC and his Chinese stereotype persona. Well, the rating should have been 3.5-3.7, but you just deleted the reviews. Disappointment.
Multiversal: The Shop
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All the action are the same (When a new costumer shows up) - What you mean.. are you talking about where the characters.. buying items. (What do you expect them to do in the mc store.) - Or are you talking about where the character from other Anime, Manga, Video game and novel got shocked when they entered the store..? (..I mean.. Who wouldnt?) - Or perhaps your talking about where the mc (owner) of the store greets new costumer and you feel like its just the same dialogue.. Well it is not (Summer rose - She is unconscious when she enter or got to the store because she is running from an enemy or something) (Ozma, Glynda Goodwitch, Raven Branwen - Brought by summer rose into the store ) (Shirou Emiya, Asa Mikata - Walked through the store by a magical door and meets the mc and became vigilant, warry towards the mc.) .w. I mean.. i understand why it feels the same when there is new costumer coming into the store (But you cant write many different scenario where a new character entered the mc store (Unless your a good writer maybe you should write your own fanfic and maybe ill read it) ) And as for the mc doing chinese stereotype persona.. i kinda understand.
What kind of Sigma am I to respond after 2 months? I wasn't going to respond to this..... really stupid comment, but after thinking about it, I did. ALL the action is the same, the characters are like cardboard. They think one thing but do another. Just "Oh, he's cautious" can't convey a character's feelings. For me - all those fanfics with the shop are just bottoms that should not be read.
FandomExplorer_2nd:All the action are the same (When a new costumer shows up) - What you mean.. are you talking about where the characters.. buying items. (What do you expect them to do in the mc store.) - Or are you talking about where the character from other Anime, Manga, Video game and novel got shocked when they entered the store..? (..I mean.. Who wouldnt?) - Or perhaps your talking about where the mc (owner) of the store greets new costumer and you feel like its just the same dialogue.. Well it is not (Summer rose - She is unconscious when she enter or got to the store because she is running from an enemy or something) (Ozma, Glynda Goodwitch, Raven Branwen - Brought by summer rose into the store ) (Shirou Emiya, Asa Mikata - Walked through the store by a magical door and meets the mc and became vigilant, warry towards the mc.) .w. I mean.. i understand why it feels the same when there is new costumer coming into the store (But you cant write many different scenario where a new character entered the mc store (Unless your a good writer maybe you should write your own fanfic and maybe ill read it) ) And as for the mc doing chinese stereotype persona.. i kinda understand.