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Thank you to the author for 2 chapters a day, I'm flattered. About Lee Su-hye. Although her M16 is considered a good weapon, will there be others? Submachine guns, grenade launchers and ahem-ahem... Miniguns?

No, I mean, how can he see his "X-ray" type skills through a mirror? By its very nature, what is in the mirror is a copy in the 2D world. Skills of this type shouldn't work on a reflection, should they?

Question to the author: How can the MC "see" their new skill through a mirror? Essentially, what they see is their own reflection in a 2D world, while they themselves are in 3D, which means the reflection shouldn't have the "depth" to view magic circuits and the soul. The question would be resolved if it were a function like "assessment," "status check," etc., which works simply by seeing the object, but the new skill works like an X-ray, which doesn't work through reflection.

This novel is a really good one. I endured the chapters up to the royal battle arc, and honestly, I don't regret it. The novel has its flaws: slow pacing and lack of romance. In 225 chapters, only 6 stories have been covered, but there are really a lot of events within them. Some of them are pleasant to watch, some are quite boring, for example: when several chapters are devoted to other characters in the 6th story. But I perfectly understand that this is necessary for the characters to develop and I will not demand that this does not happen. Still, why not speed things up a bit? I'm a greedy person, I want to read a lot, see more and learn a lot) about romance: well, the path has already been trodden, but the MC doesn't want to walk on it. This is subjective, but because of this the story seems kind of... grayish? Well, considering the roles of the extras, it's not surprising. An optional thing, but very pleasant. As for the writing - there are no complaints. I use a translator myself, so I don't see anything like that. I will hope for at least 2 chapters a day, author) A question about Ea Angelika. It's kind of unimpressive. I've watched Fate and I know what kind of filth that thing can pull off, but here it's used like a club...

Another victim of "plot preservation", but honestly, not bad, even though most things are copied and changed from the manhwa "The Guide to the Survival of a Supporting Character in the Academy".

Alas, dropped at chapter 13. After chapter 5, the writing style became the one I hate the most - chatGPT edited and artificially stretched. I hate this disgusting writing style.

This novel is a complete dumpster fire. The writing style constantly tries to build suspense, but it only ends up being cringeworthy and annoying. The mc dedicated his life to simply thwarting the protagonist of the novel he ended up in. For this purpose, he chose to abandon all the connections that the body he transmigrated into had, even though he merged with it. Maybe he watched the memories like a "movie," there's no exact confirmation, but it's still unpleasant. And also, the short chapters, events, daily life – it's all stretched out artificially; the author was clearly trying to create this stupid intrigue. Plus, the utterly repulsive protagonist who just irritates with his eighth-grader syndrome, which hasn't even fully awakened yet. While writing this review, I forgot most of what I had to write, but I wouldn't recommend you read this. I also have a wish: when author engage in 18+ activities in real life, may the girl create suspense just like you, who stretches things out over 3-4 chapters.

I am truly disappointed. I’m just an ordinary reader, and I’m very disappointed. Most of the tags are not valid and are there just for show. In my opinion, character development is somewhat lacking, and, let’s say, "the world revolves around the main character, and when he interacts with others, it’s as if they come off pause." To me, that’s bad. There’s no real development, the system is practically useless, and the main character doesn’t grow in terms of strength or personality. He talks about killing when it’s convenient for him, which I find hypocritical. Moreover, the character he admired just disappeared as if they never existed, along with Noah’s respect for them. In terms of power, the author simply gave him a 30x mana boost and left it at that. The author turned a novel with potential into something monotonous, dull, and unpolished, far worse than slice-of-life stories due to the "world revolves around the hero" aspect and the author’s forgetfulness.

I'm disappointed. I've read 160 chapters and I'll tell you how freaking disappointed I am. From this useless academy that is just a burden, a system that had bad luck with the master, to how he failed to utilize the abilities to the fullest. He had so many opportunities to become stronger, but the author decided that the main character wouldn't be super strong. A clone that just doesn't make sense. How could a person create something that could adopt the properties of the original when all of his abilities are BLESSED! Eleanor, who the protagonist missed. Heck, he didn't take the opportunity to fight Sun Wukong for fuck's sake. I'm disappointed as hell that I wasted my time on this. The prison arch should have developed him, but what? No forging, NOTHING. The author just decided to forget about it.

This work does not warrant such a glaring mistake. Yes, the author is a novice, and if they had written this novel two years ago, I’m confident they would have made the main character the strongest within 10 chapters, squeezing in moments where he charms every girl with just two words. No offense, but there’s absolutely no plot here, despite the author’s claims about "plot and plot points." The story is riddled with so many plot holes that even Maasdam cheese would look solid in comparison. The characters are shallow, the main character is handed everything on a silver platter, and there’s an overabundance of "deus ex machina" moments. Logic and motivation are nonexistent. A simple example: how on earth did he manage to take the exam while concealing HIS NAME??? Please, don’t waste your time on this and don’t be misled by the ratings.