Review Detail of ArdaPendragon in Multiversal: The Shop
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The story was good at first, but the main character has no sense of ownership.In short, the first thing I disliked was the Shiro x Lorelei couple. (The chapters where Shirou was whi*ped and the relationship was totally forced). And go to Kuroino world (a hen*ai world),Instead of saving a rated character beforehand, she gets involved in the story after she was ra*ed. I'm sorry but I refuse to read a story that includes ra*e and hentai.good luck to you all.(Re-review after deletion)
Multiversal: The Shop
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Check my second response, I explained I meant why write a story about after she was raped instead of just writing a story where she wasn’t raped yet or in the first place because mc saves her from that fate that was the whole intention I just worded that so wrongly and so badly it came out in a completely different direction
Bob_Uchiha_XD:So...The police should not arrest people who have had sexual relations with their kidnapped daughter and under the influence of hallucinogens. Right?
Ok I may have worded that very wrongly, and I just now read it again after reading your comment. I meant why not help her so she doesn’t get raped or before she is and instead writing about her being raped and then helping afterwards. That was poor choice of wording on my part
Sir_Stronghold:why help someone after they've been raped...?image
that wasnt my question but the response to the same question. Someone said why save someone who's been raped so I questioned it with consern
Cerberus_36:im more concerned with your question bro.image
Sir_Stronghold:that wasnt my question but the response to the same question. Someone said why save someone who's been raped so I questioned it with consern
So...The police should not arrest people who have had sexual relations with their kidnapped daughter and under the influence of hallucinogens. Right?
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Bob_Uchiha_XD:So...The police should not arrest people who have had sexual relations with their kidnapped daughter and under the influence of hallucinogens. Right?