Thank you for reviewing mine. So, here is mine to yours, 1, Story wise, it has an interesting plot for a stranger like me, though change/edit the long title since it does not actually captivated my attention. 2. In my opinion, the shorter the title and more concise the better. 3. Grammar wise, consult an editor for that. Thank you.
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