Zherie17
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I am an aspiring, ugly and poor fiction writer who loves arts, literature and anime from the Philippines.
2021-01-20 JoinedPhilippines
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Zherie172 years agoReplied to DARK_DEKUAw! Thank you so much for this comment. Will read yours if you have/currently writing one when I have time.
- Zherie172 years agoReplied to Hollowed_6791
Hi. I do not know what this means but thanks.
- Zherie172 years agoReplied to SoniiNaaz
thank you this comment. will read yours soonest
- Zherie172 years agoPosted
Thank you for reviewing mine. So, here is mine to yours. Story wise, it has an intriguing plot though: 1. Good idea to start the story with an interesting prologue. 2. Good language control. 3. Few edits are needed to but, everything is just fine. Again, thank you and best of luck to you.
- Zherie172 years agoCommented
Divide the longer paragraphs into two.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Zherie172 years agoCommented
Revise this.
