Review Detail of Elona_Alone in 3 days before death

The novel was nice and it have an interesting pace but I think the writer need to do some editing. Paragraphs are too long making it hard to follow. The exclamation marks, apostrophe, full stop and some other things aren't in place. I advice that the writer use quillbot, Grammerly or perhaps a paraphrasing app on app store or playstore. It would help in the editing of the book since it needs a lot of editing. I see potential but I believe the writer can do more.