Review Detail of Laplaces_dream in Marvel: The Foundation

Just read anything else pls. . Looks like not even the SCP Foundation can escape from the power of PLOT. The MC is like an edgy 14 year old sometimes. I mean who the hell creates a full black body with glowing eyes and a smile?! (Yes. Illustrations of the 05 council depict them as black silhouettes with smiles or symbols on their faces, but those are just that; illustrations. Those symbols are just a fragment of the actual person who sits on the council. The symbols represent just a facet of their feats or responsibilities as the 05-Council. That is not how they actually look.) The grammar also deteriorated gradually. Some readers said Chatgpt, some said MTL, I don't know what the reason is for sure, but yes; the grammar gets gradually worse throughout the chapters. Sometimes even being seizure inducing at the worst moments. Some readers didn't really like the gender bending the MC does at some point, but I had no complaints about that; though it did seem a little unnecessary. I quite like the idea of an MC being a ruthless sociopath using any methods available to complete their goals. But for that moment, turning into a girl was one of the last(and theoretically least effective) method to deal with his problems. Also. The main character monologues a lot. Usually I don't have a problem with that, but just something about him ticks me the wrong way. He seems like an immature child and extremely pretentious. So no matter how much the author tries to turn the main character into a mysterious shadowy figure manipulating everything from the dark, his monologues just make me think of a pretentious kid trying to act all serious and mysterious and try to do what he thinks an actual 05 Council member do and what would look cool. Updates are stable. No problems with that. But this Fanfic is not good at all. This is "meh" at best and unbearably stupid at worst. Only read this if you have nothing else to read and pls don't waste your money on the author's patr.eon. There are a lot more fanfics with lot better plots and writing styles who deserve your support. Go help them out. Final verdict: Showed a lot of promise at first(first 10 chapters I think). Then everything went downhill from there. The main character is not really likable. The plot convenience is really prevalent throughout the fic. A lot of unnecessary decisions also present. And finally... This is really boring too most of the time. If this stopped publishing tomorrow, the most I would think is "Damn... Whatever"