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Laplaces_dream6dPostedJust read anything else pls. . Looks like not even the SCP Foundation can escape from the power of PLOT. The MC is like an edgy 14 year old sometimes. I mean who the hell creates a full black body with glowing eyes and a smile?! (Yes. Illustrations of the 05 council depict them as black silhouettes with smiles or symbols on their faces, but those are just that; illustrations. Those symbols are just a fragment of the actual person who sits on the council. The symbols represent just a facet of their feats or responsibilities as the 05-Council. That is not how they actually look.) The grammar also deteriorated gradually. Some readers said Chatgpt, some said MTL, I don't know what the reason is for sure, but yes; the grammar gets gradually worse throughout the chapters. Sometimes even being seizure inducing at the worst moments. Some readers didn't really like the gender bending the MC does at some point, but I had no complaints about that; though it did seem a little unnecessary. I quite like the idea of an MC being a ruthless sociopath using any methods available to complete their goals. But for that moment, turning into a girl was one of the last(and theoretically least effective) method to deal with his problems. Also. The main character monologues a lot. Usually I don't have a problem with that, but just something about him ticks me the wrong way. He seems like an immature child and extremely pretentious. So no matter how much the author tries to turn the main character into a mysterious shadowy figure manipulating everything from the dark, his monologues just make me think of a pretentious kid trying to act all serious and mysterious and try to do what he thinks an actual 05 Council member do and what would look cool. Updates are stable. No problems with that. But this Fanfic is not good at all. This is "meh" at best and unbearably stupid at worst. Only read this if you have nothing else to read and pls don't waste your money on the author's patr.eon. There are a lot more fanfics with lot better plots and writing styles who deserve your support. Go help them out. Final verdict: Showed a lot of promise at first(first 10 chapters I think). Then everything went downhill from there. The main character is not really likable. The plot convenience is really prevalent throughout the fic. A lot of unnecessary decisions also present. And finally... This is really boring too most of the time. If this stopped publishing tomorrow, the most I would think is "Damn... Whatever"
- Laplaces_dream4mthCommented'One Piece is like the Red Dead Redemption 2 of the mangas... No, Red Redemption is the One Piece from the games' He tries to explain his fanboyism to Cortana one day, but just lets her more confused
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Ashley!
"Hiyori!" I say strongly, in a whisper "Look at me." - Laplaces_dream8mthReplied to Final_Order
Then I have no idea who it is...
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It's Shizuru Ioroi, isn't it???
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Shizuru Ioroi???
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Reality doesn't work like that.
The husband of the woman who was on the phone would find out about his wife cheating on him the next day from a friend of his who was passing by the hotel. Due to the stress of his wife's cheating, the husband would make a mistake in mailing his work documents, which would lead to a big scandal of the company's fraud being exposed. - Laplaces_dream8mthCommented
Train your body so you can Discombobulate
Also it seems that my power is more complicated than I thought. For now, it looks like I have become Sherlock Holmes. But the optimal action that my mind simulates and my body's action doesn't seem to match. I need to train my body. - Laplaces_dream8mthReplied to VanHellsing6969'If my brother wants to get married, why not marry me to him?'
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Now I am almost sure it's Archer...
In order to turn Bible Revision into a perfect crime, the Heroic Spirit presented their theory. - Laplaces_dream8mthCommented
This guy???
"Call me 'Napoleon'." - Laplaces_dream8mthCommented
Kouro's virginity:
'Time to take Kouro's virginity!' - Laplaces_dream8mthCommented
Artorius' brain:
'Constantly pondering how to bring welfare to the people, shining with brilliant thoughts at every moment. As expected of Brother.' - Laplaces_dream8mthCommented
I will accept any outcome that will not result in Esdeath becoming a Waifu.Stay strong author!
"Hmmmm…," Makoto mused, his mind deep in contemplation. If the events unfolded as they did in the original story, Suzuka would likely have found refuge under Esdeath's protection by now. It presented an opportunity to accuse Esdeath of treason, but Makoto knew that timing was crucial. He needed to amass enough forces to overpower Esdeath in a decisive confrontation. - Laplaces_dream9mthReplied to Ricardo_Miloos
Fate/Grand Order THE MOVIE Divine Realm of the Round Table
Not to brag, but he could knock down scum like Agravain with just one hand. - Laplaces_dream9mthReplied to LongShlong
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'I'll gladly tutor Gwen. Cowboy style,' - Laplaces_dream9mthCommented
Mordred's brain:
'If my brother wants to get married, why not marry me to him?' - Laplaces_dream9mthCommented
Sigma male Agravain disagrees...
Not to brag, but he could knock down scum like Agravain with just one hand. - Laplaces_dream9mthCommented
I am just happy with the fact that Esdeath will not be a love interest.
I'm not sure if people would like this chapter.😅😅