Review Detail of Gian_Carpio in I Will Kill The Author

Basically a 4.5 star novel that derails itself midway and crashes to oblivion. This novel is a waste of time. The novel insist upon itself and thats takes down the quality of the novel a lot. It’s like the author never had a success like this so he took it up a notch but instead destroyed a rather good story. Too much complication, too much shit. The main goals and personalities of the main character are being overshadowed by his fate and past life. The author is overloading it with bullshit that I doubt he knows what to do with it anymore. I can’t stand novels like this that show how few patience the author has. And how none of the characters actions make sense. Spoilers that only show hypocrisy of author : ~Father wants to protect his son from the world so instead of begging his best friend who know how to bipass a limited core, he just manipulates his son to be a trash rapist? Even though the father knows any action he does will inevitably speed up earths demise, he shackled his son with ineptness. Nothing makes sense, we were given half assed answers that the author probably made up on the fly so his novel could sound more mysterious. The author can do a lot of things and I liked a lot of things in this novel but his mysteries are the worst part of it. To much foreshadowing, too much fate shit but the author doesnt know how to navigate it at all. It’s justa bunch of repetetive shit at this point. The foreshadowing has been probably repeated 10times now and I can assure you the author giggles himsef to death on how brilliant he thinks he is but it just ends up looking trashy and desperate on paper. He literally wrote a 2 chapter backround story for someone who the mc will probably fight in the next 1000 chapters. I dont care really. Instead of building outside of itself, it builds in and overcomplicates the story. The thing with Kai further ruins it because instead of a smart mc who controls everything around him. We get a dumbass who is controlled by everyone around him which is the opposite of what i want as the mc. So now if you continue to read from chapter 300, you just look up. Look up from the mysteries from down below, you look up from the power levels from mortality. Mind you be is still silver at chapter 300. Instead of being immersed by the story you are forced to tilt your head up to fate and stress about the future and somehow how the mc triumphs against future challenges. Another annoying part of the book is how the author insist on Nero having plot armor yet never showing it once. Nero only ever used his gifts as plot armor, nothing lucky, nothing bullshit ever happened to him. His existence is a plot armor which eliminates it to be plot armor and itself and points to characterization as the problem. The author doesnt even know what plot armor is! JFC. I hate stories ruined by complexity. Yes there are authors that could handle it like Gu Zhen ren and stuff but you could basically read the author drowning in his work. Were living through mollasess in chapter 300 and its a lot to be more PLOTHOLEY. I hate wasted works like this.