Review Detail of Card_6819 in I Will Kill The Author

I do like your novel, really do, its enjoyable from my end. Its just the references are overboard.. There are 2 death note references, 'I can't laugh yet. ' This is repeated twice. Then Of course there's classroom of the Elite, Grace seem to be a mix of kei and kushida, that hidden boss who Quinn fears kinda seem like Ryuuk but smarter and dangerous and plus he believe he believe someone is pulling the strings behind Class A and plus the hidden boss is from class C so yeah... And there was some code geass too but that's manageable. Plot seem kinda forced, I mean it seemed he just went from normal to super genius. And Lucas saying - 'Fear me' 'there's no way you can escape, submit to me'..and sometimes that emotional eyes. His character never gonna lie is cringey. I think for him you should focus on 'showing not telling'. Altogether, you can make people more realistic, plot development smoother and stop with the overly noticeable references and there you have it. A Great novel.