Item: Bloodline Legacy
Rating: 5
Author: ZoeTinnah

ZoeTinnahAuthor1yr

2023-02-16 18:03

Hi everyone here I come again. Thanking everyone that gives thier time to my novel I really appreciate This time let me take this as A&Q you can ask me anything you want. ready to answer

Bloodline Legacy

ZoeTinnah

4.5

125 Chs

Liked by 13 people

Replies19

MaedreasLv13

1girl or harem?

1yr

ZoeTinnahAuthor

In the first four chapters, he was a player but later changed, and since there are more action scenes than romantic scenes, you can check it out

Maedreas:1girl or harem?

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Ashborn1609Lv4

just answer by its a harem(more than one girl) or its only one female lead it'll lessen the chance of getting bad critics from some readers I don't wanna read a harem

ZoeTinnah:In the first four chapters, he was a player but later changed, and since there are more action scenes than romantic scenes, you can check it out

1yr

ZoeTinnahAuthor

One female lead

Ashborn1609:just answer by its a harem(more than one girl) or its only one female lead it'll lessen the chance of getting bad critics from some readers I don't wanna read a harem

1yr

Ashborn1609Lv4

oh bookmarked then

ZoeTinnah:One female lead

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ZoeTinnahAuthor

Thanks that means a lot to me

Ashborn1609:oh bookmarked then
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ZoeTinnahAuthor

Thank you that means a lot to me

Ashborn1609:oh bookmarked then
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FightLoveSystemLv13

It was a good read But please remove the full stop from title

1yr

ZoeTinnahAuthor

Thanks

FightLoveSystem:It was a good read But please remove the full stop from title

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ZoeTinnahAuthor

You can also recommend if possible

FightLoveSystem:It was a good read But please remove the full stop from title

1yr

RatedOverrLv2

Will the love be one sided or does the MC also love the FL (I have read stuff recently where, despite the romance tag, it is one sided so I have trust issues lol)

ZoeTinnah:One female lead

1yr

ZoeTinnahAuthor

MC is complicated who to love, he confessed to some who rejected him with insults and my FMC was rejected at first but in 47-48 chap they got yogether

RatedOverr:Will the love be one sided or does the MC also love the FL (I have read stuff recently where, despite the romance tag, it is one sided so I have trust issues lol)

1yr

ILovemyself_84Lv4

but what about the MCs morality, is he a hero or is he a villain or maybe A antihero or a neutral person that leans on the good side or evil side?

ZoeTinnah:MC is complicated who to love, he confessed to some who rejected him with insults and my FMC was rejected at first but in 47-48 chap they got yogether

1yr

ZoeTinnahAuthor

A hero

ILovemyself_84:but what about the MCs morality, is he a hero or is he a villain or maybe A antihero or a neutral person that leans on the good side or evil side?

1yr

Romance_guyLv14

Is this dropped

ZoeTinnah:In the first four chapters, he was a player but later changed, and since there are more action scenes than romantic scenes, you can check it out

1yr

ZoeTinnahAuthor

Romance_guy:Is this dropped

1yr

ZoeTinnahAuthor

No, Iwas currently having some health problems

Romance_guy:Is this dropped

1yr

Romance_guyLv14

Hope your feeling better

ZoeTinnah:No, Iwas currently having some health problems

1yr

ZoeTinnahAuthor

Yeah, Imupdating soon

Romance_guy:Hope your feeling better

1yr

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ThefantastictouchLv4

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