Honest review of my own story. My plot and character design are definitely not worth 5 stars so I gave it 3 stars. I know there will be plot holes since I am an amateur writer but I hope the story is still somewhat enjoyable to those who read it.
honeyseeto_03
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LIKEAlax_Gecko:Hello Author, are you still around? If you are, please respond. I want to make a Twilight fanfic and I want to use your story as a reference. Do you permit it? The story will be drafted and untitled. I await your answer.
I don't know why my comments has been deleted so I will tells you again that I have big expectations for your novel your mc is not op,your novels gives a good vibes for us like some mysterious treasure that is waiting for us to open it I wish you upload more chapters frequently ,and to make Alice cullens his love interest cause she's the best girl ever aka the cutest everđ aka our childhood crush
cassius_black_5382:I don't know why my comments has been deleted so I will tells you again that I have big expectations for your novel your mc is not op,your novels gives a good vibes for us like some mysterious treasure that is waiting for us to open it I wish you upload more chapters frequently ,and to make Alice cullens his love interest cause she's the best girl ever aka the cutest everđ aka our childhood crushimage
Alright thx. Sure, it will be the first thing on the To-Do List. Also, shamefully I have 2 more requests. First, I hope you can drop by and critique my story from your perspective as a writer. Second, I hope you don't drop your story course I wanna see how the story ends and the journey to it, because I am a reader first and a writer second.
honeyseeto_03:Sure you can but I would prefer if you mention my story as a reference.
how you made alice the LI completetly shatters lore in the books it was stated that alice's future sight is based off of decided choices or choices with high probabilty alan hasnt even made the choice to presue someone as a romantic partner yet
honeyseeto_03:Oh I didn't know your comment was deleted. But thank you so much đ