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honeyseeto_03
honeyseeto_03Author1yrhoneyseeto_03

Honest review of my own story. My plot and character design are definitely not worth 5 stars so I gave it 3 stars. I know there will be plot holes since I am an amateur writer but I hope the story is still somewhat enjoyable to those who read it.

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Twilight: A Transmigration Story

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honeyseeto_03
honeyseeto_03Authorhoneyseeto_03

Sure you can but I would prefer if you mention my story as a reference.

Alax_Gecko:Hello Author, are you still around? If you are, please respond. I want to make a Twilight fanfic and I want to use your story as a reference. Do you permit it? The story will be drafted and untitled. I await your answer.
cassius_black_5382
cassius_black_5382Lv4cassius_black_5382

I don't know why my comments has been deleted so I will tells you again that I have big expectations for your novel your mc is not op,your novels gives a good vibes for us like some mysterious treasure that is waiting for us to open it I wish you upload more chapters frequently ,and to make Alice cullens his love interest cause she's the best girl ever aka the cutest ever😍 aka our childhood crush

honeyseeto_03
honeyseeto_03Authorhoneyseeto_03

Oh I didn't know your comment was deleted. But thank you so much 💓

cassius_black_5382:I don't know why my comments has been deleted so I will tells you again that I have big expectations for your novel your mc is not op,your novels gives a good vibes for us like some mysterious treasure that is waiting for us to open it I wish you upload more chapters frequently ,and to make Alice cullens his love interest cause she's the best girl ever aka the cutest ever😍 aka our childhood crush
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ToxicTyrant
ToxicTyrantLv11ToxicTyrant

just keep updating and more frequently

BlackFox_Memorys
BlackFox_MemorysLv11BlackFox_Memorys

pfv, me diz que vc nao largou o romance

NightCrown
NightCrownLv14NightCrown

dropped?

XGRIMMHEARTX
XGRIMMHEARTXLv4XGRIMMHEARTX

Was this fic dropped because there hasn’ t been and update in awhile?

Enlightened_Rookie
Enlightened_RookieLv13Enlightened_Rookie

Maybe if u finished it lol

Damian0481
Damian0481Lv13Damian0481

seeems it got dropped

UnKnoWn12345678910
UnKnoWn12345678910Lv4UnKnoWn12345678910

Why did you stop? It seems promising

Alax_Gecko
Alax_GeckoLv4Alax_Gecko

Hello Author, are you still around? If you are, please respond. I want to make a Twilight fanfic and I want to use your story as a reference. Do you permit it? The story will be drafted and untitled. I await your answer.

Alax_Gecko
Alax_GeckoLv4Alax_Gecko

Alright thx. Sure, it will be the first thing on the To-Do List. Also, shamefully I have 2 more requests. First, I hope you can drop by and critique my story from your perspective as a writer. Second, I hope you don't drop your story course I wanna see how the story ends and the journey to it, because I am a reader first and a writer second.

honeyseeto_03:Sure you can but I would prefer if you mention my story as a reference.
THE_SAVAGE_KITTY
THE_SAVAGE_KITTYLv14THE_SAVAGE_KITTY

how you made alice the LI completetly shatters lore in the books it was stated that alice's future sight is based off of decided choices or choices with high probabilty alan hasnt even made the choice to presue someone as a romantic partner yet

honeyseeto_03:Oh I didn't know your comment was deleted. But thank you so much 💓