good story, it has potential, the only downside is that the author blocked the chapters behind the paywall too early

This is a great story. 10/10 If you like magic try this one out.

Uma história muito boa, existem alguns erros ou coisas ainda não explicadas .estou parando de ler por não poder pagar os capítulos, mas ainda recomendo para quem estiver com tempo para ler.

its not worth your time .

The way the system works is bery interesting. And the MC isn't a coward wich is always a plus point for me.

was enjoying the novel until the forced romance between marya and the protagonist. too forced. nor natural really disappointed. and it seems she's going to be a mainstay as the mc gon be her protector or whatever bullshit.

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I have read all the reviews, but I'll wrote mine. Most have a point, but I'll say it was only just bland at the beginning as the writing was awful. But this gets better gradually, and the grammars really improved. Though, this book has a lot of cringy moment or statement, but it's actually good. The world building, well, is slowly built up. The same goes for the characters. The power system is simple and straight forward, easy to understand. And the same for the magic system, simple and easy to understand. In fact with its foundation, it's easy to formulate what the next rank could be like instead of having random nee tiers drop from no where. The book has a lot of potential, the only thing I'll say is that, though there is gradual improvement, but the writing skills needs some more upgrade. If the writing skills improve, this book will be a 4, and if possible full 5 star rating. Thanks

was starting to get to the point I would say good back story was growing and book was coming along then it just stopped updating no reason was given they just stopped sadly