Review Detail of ShadowAmeratsu in The Tellus Mage(OLD VERSION OLD VERSION OLD VERSION OLD VERSION)

Item: The Tellus Mage(OLD VERSION OLD VERSION OLD VERSION OLD VERSION)
Rating: 4.2

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ShadowAmeratsuLv21yrShadowAmeratsu

The novel has an impressive plot, with huge room to have the characters roam, but the pilot chapter seemed to lack emotion. It had great detail and amazing descriptions, but when it came to providing emotions or human body language, it didn't seem the best. I hope that it improves as it goes along, but I'm optimistic of its future :)

The Tellus Mage(OLD VERSION OLD VERSION OLD VERSION OLD VERSION)

Junethephatcat

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JunethephatcatAuthorJunethephatcat

Thank you for your encouragement and constructive criticism. I promise that the latest chapters, from chapter 8 and onward are improved greatly in the aspects you mentioned. I will get back to the pilot chapter and the first few ones shortly. Again, thank you!

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