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EnlightenedDummy
EnlightenedDummyLv42yr
2022-12-21 02:54

All I'd like to know is why the Title have "Loner" in it when there's a "Harem" tag, A "Loner" is alone, "Harem" is with "Multiple" people. All I'm saying is that the Title makes no sense, other than that the story is oryt.

Loner in Danmachi

Darkness_Enjoyer
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Darkness_Enjoyer
Darkness_EnjoyerAuthor

He will start as a loner, but since this is the story of Danmachi and fanfiction, it will slowly transform into the harem. But the important thing is 'slowly.' I won't write some brainless romance or harem where the MC treats girls like some Pokemon.

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EnlightenedDummy
EnlightenedDummyLv4

I see, so will you change the Title when he does reach that point?

Darkness_Enjoyer:He will start as a loner, but since this is the story of Danmachi and fanfiction, it will slowly transform into the harem. But the important thing is 'slowly.' I won't write some brainless romance or harem where the MC treats girls like some Pokemon.
2yr
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Darkness_Enjoyer
Darkness_EnjoyerAuthor

Nope, since he was a loner and changed the way his life, I don't think the title will be invalid.

EnlightenedDummy:I see, so will you change the Title when he does reach that point?
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Bierbart
BierbartLv14

Kind of questionable with his skill since it will loose its usefulness then. also dunno what to think there with a literal slave MC to the system and ROB since it is for his amusement and thr literal random forced quest could be like "get tortured and watch while getting cucked" and he is forced to do just that, so...

Darkness_Enjoyer:He will start as a loner, but since this is the story of Danmachi and fanfiction, it will slowly transform into the harem. But the important thing is 'slowly.' I won't write some brainless romance or harem where the MC treats girls like some Pokemon.
2yr
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TheUltimateP1e
TheUltimateP1eLv4

But those females dont follow him into dungeon and get stupid powerups or disturb his grind right? He will be a one man adventurer right?

Darkness_Enjoyer:Nope, since he was a loner and changed the way his life, I don't think the title will be invalid.
2yr
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Darkness_Enjoyer
Darkness_EnjoyerAuthor

I plan to do that.

TheUltimateP1e:But those females dont follow him into dungeon and get stupid powerups or disturb his grind right? He will be a one man adventurer right?
2yr
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DaoistjcJwtW
DaoistjcJwtWLv1

Deberías dejar que la familia del hombre crezca y agrega persona que se encuentra danmachi memoria free de esa manera la familia va ganando fama

Darkness_Enjoyer:I plan to do that.
2yr
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Aldorax
AldoraxLv13

does this really happen??

Bierbart:Kind of questionable with his skill since it will loose its usefulness then. also dunno what to think there with a literal slave MC to the system and ROB since it is for his amusement and thr literal random forced quest could be like "get tortured and watch while getting cucked" and he is forced to do just that, so...
2yr
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JRCaste
JRCasteLv4

that's a stupid question, What kind of Author does that? It's not some gender shet that could be changed if one wanted. they've already published this as is

EnlightenedDummy:I see, so will you change the Title when he does reach that point?
2yr
EnlightenedDummy
EnlightenedDummyLv4

chillax man, I was just asking.

JRCaste:that's a stupid question, What kind of Author does that? It's not some gender shet that could be changed if one wanted. they've already published this as is
2yr
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Adam_Clinton
Adam_ClintonLv13

You mean you will make them follow him into the dungeon and get stupid power ups and disturb his grind or you won't make them do that?

Darkness_Enjoyer:I plan to do that.
2yr
VoidStar_Leviathan
VoidStar_LeviathanLv3

loner doesn't always mean being by yourself physically it can also mean mentally as well. You can have people around you but still feel alone.

2yr
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EnlightenedDummy
EnlightenedDummyLv4

That's called being depressed...

VoidStar_Leviathan:loner doesn't always mean being by yourself physically it can also mean mentally as well. You can have people around you but still feel alone.
2yr
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RatedOverr
RatedOverrLv2

THANK YOUUUUU. Basically all danmachi fics are just MC picking up the girls with no actual developed romance/relationships, so glad there is finally one that isn't (if you know any other danmachi fics with actual developed relationships could you recommend them?)

Darkness_Enjoyer:He will start as a loner, but since this is the story of Danmachi and fanfiction, it will slowly transform into the harem. But the important thing is 'slowly.' I won't write some brainless romance or harem where the MC treats girls like some Pokemon.
2yr
Darkness_Enjoyer
Darkness_EnjoyerAuthor

Danmachi with Plasmids and Endless Path: Infinite Cosmos. They are both outstanding novels and way above mine, so I recommend them.

RatedOverr:THANK YOUUUUU. Basically all danmachi fics are just MC picking up the girls with no actual developed romance/relationships, so glad there is finally one that isn't (if you know any other danmachi fics with actual developed relationships could you recommend them?)
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MKA
MKALv4

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Hydranoid88
Hydranoid88Lv4

BORE

Darkness_Enjoyer:He will start as a loner, but since this is the story of Danmachi and fanfiction, it will slowly transform into the harem. But the important thing is 'slowly.' I won't write some brainless romance or harem where the MC treats girls like some Pokemon.
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Jackoftrades
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It’s alright. He is suppose to be a loner but his social skills are high even if he acts shy. There are a couple troupes I really dislike. Two of them being how the system and his life operates. The fight scenes are alright. Just average at best. This review is after reading 30 chapters

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Zizinho21
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Raad like, the first 6 paragraphs he has family and friends, joins Hestia. 110% a loner, totally...

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But
ButLv14

'Loaner' in the title doesn’t work if you have a 'harem' tag.

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Psan
PsanLv6

Well... Seems good.... But I'm worried about the Villian tag... I mean Villian MC+Hestia=Impossible, Hestia is not a goddess who would tolerate a villain as a family. Author, pls do explain

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