All I'd like to know is why the Title have "Loner" in it when there's a "Harem" tag, A "Loner" is alone, "Harem" is with "Multiple" people. All I'm saying is that the Title makes no sense, other than that the story is oryt.

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The story goes well. I like the personality of the main character. He joins Hestia as a family.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

As long this is not faithful to the canon plot then it will be good. I hope for a twist that takes the story on another path. Istg too many danmachi fanfics are just self inserts doing the exact same thing Bell did so its basically the same story but with a different character and dialouge. I know this will be different tho Im sure lol

Bro read if you want I’m saying that it isn’t for me. This story is very bad in my opinion. The writing quality is definitely amateur and the content is meh. The mc is meant to be anti social but isn’t. There is a gross amount descriptive writing for everything that makes it seem very repetitive like a circle. The dialogue is so dull, just unintelligent, and unnecessary. It’s readable but it’s a brainless read. Shut down your brain before reading if you want the best experience.

It’s alright. He is suppose to be a loner but his social skills are high even if he acts shy. There are a couple troupes I really dislike. Two of them being how the system and his life operates. The fight scenes are alright. Just average at best. This review is after reading 30 chapters

Raad like, the first 6 paragraphs he has family and friends, joins Hestia. 110% a loner, totally...

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'Loaner' in the title doesn’t work if you have a 'harem' tag.

Well... Seems good.... But I'm worried about the Villian tag... I mean Villian MC+Hestia=Impossible, Hestia is not a goddess who would tolerate a villain as a family. Author, pls do explain