While the story and writing is good, my own personal issue comes from shirou's personality. Its very generic and bland and is just similar to many OCs. I just find him boring and forgettable.
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LIKEkurit_kun:I didn't flesh out his character just yet but he is bland on purpose. He doesn't remember anything and you could say that he is an empty shell ready to be filled and I hope it will show in future chapters.
It's on pause but will return shortly after. I'm currently re-reading and writes some notes to refresh my memories.
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