Item: Overlord of biblical proportions
Rating: 3.8
Author: DaoistKQC0Kd

DaoistKQC0KdLv19mth

2024-03-21 23:20

Quite a controversial work, well written, but the plot moves at the speed of a manhole cover. For a large amount of written text, almost nothing happened, many things do not need to be described in such detail, since this really kills all the dynamics, which already do not exist. Also, too much time is spent on secondary things, and not enough on the main ones.

Overlord of biblical proportions

RussainReversal

4.4

45 Chs

Liked by 9 people

Replies2

Arkhengelsk54Lv4

he does this a lot, and I mean a lot in his other works on fanfiction.net

7mth

DaoistKQC0KdLv1

In the great foreigner, there is the same problem with the "water" in the work.

Arkhengelsk54:he does this a lot, and I mean a lot in his other works on fanfiction.net

6mth

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jamwerewolfLv4

I am so bored reading this that I just skip most text since there is a lot of boring over-the-top text I tried to read but after one chapter I get bored like nothing would happen for the chapter. There is just so much text and Ainz is so inactive he does nothing in over 20 chapters he does some things but they are small and only for some of the chapter and my god does he barely talk to the devils at all he is so scared that he is like I have no info I should lay low and so he does nothing we get more pov from side characters then we do ainz like in overlord he would do a test to see how strong everyone is in the world yet here he does nothing but play student while trying to learn about how strong everyone is yet when he gets the fallen as minions he does not ask them anything if he just talks to them for a minute about the magic he would know that they had a different magic system he is so dumb and slow to act and repetitive that he does nothing

7mth

IamGaiLv4

I NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Skill_TopLv1

good story 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔝👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Demon_SamuraiLv4

So far this is really good, it fleshes out the characters well and does feal like I’m reading Overlord! Keep it up and take your time!

1yr

HereForGoodReadLv4

Really got the meme down pat very good writer.

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Roterro_DoneLv2

I only finished reading the prologue, but that was enough for me to get strong emotions from this work. Respect to the author![img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

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edan_wong16Lv4

this fanfic so good and need more chapter

8mth

AinzO0alGownLv14

This fic is God's gift to za warudo.....

1yr

Sato_SenpaiLv1

Why are you make Momonga incompetent? I know he bot perfect but a least he understands the situation he in but you make him run away from most of the problems

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