Review Detail of archivestone in Reincarnation Of The Strongest Spirit Master

Thanks for your good review and great criticism. I don't mind hearing such opinions out as you really mean well towards me and my novel. Mind if I ask you where, around which chapters, you felt the story got too many plots going on? So I can see if I can edit it or change what I'm currently heading with the story towards? And also learn from such a mistake in the future. Thanks again, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the novel :)))))))))

i feel like it started from chapter 100. there were a few times where i felt that some points could be worked on at other times and that a conclusion was missing. I'm currently at 250 and I feel that there are some issues that could be worked on earlier, for example I think he could have worked a bit on his own cultivation and leveled up a bit before starting to build his team. I understand the importance of the team, but his own cultivation seems to have been stagnating for a long time. there are still a few chapters to read so I don't know how it is now, but that's what I felt while reading. Also descriptions of some things can be taken in other ways. he doesn't need to explain his every intention or move to the team every time. team members can figure it out slowly, or pick up clues before everything is understood so we readers have time to understand the reasoning without having to be all explicit. it gives a better sense of discovery. a part that I found quite interesting was the fight of MC against Ibra, the situation you used to describe and increase the understanding of both the element and the technique used was very good. the only selfish request I have is that the characters be allowed to go through moments of character development. I know that the MC is a reincarnator and because of that he has more maturity than than the other kids, but I really think they are childish at times and I understand that it's part of their age. that's why I would like to suggest that they can mature a little. I hope my ideas and opinions can be of some help to you. 😁

Yes you got a good point here. The mc got a limitation of his power, to not be able to train alone and achieve good results. That was why I decided to let him form a team first and then go out there and train. The upcoming chapters are going to show his sharp rise in power. And I'll take this note to heart and make him focus first on improving his power before doing anything else. Thanks for this, and I hope you like what yet to come.

If I could suggest one thing, it would be that the MC doesn't just need to skip steps to get stronger. there are other points to work on. for example, he can train techniques that cost little spiritual power and infuse some of his elements to increase potency. moreover he can also work on slowly refining his spiritual power to be more pure and not just increasing it directly. if he has purer power his techniques can get more refined and stronger even with low spiritual power. you addressed this point at the beginning. he can train slowly even if he is busy with other things, You don't need to depend on the power of the fox alone, even if it is a slower improvement it is interesting to see. I will continue to look forward to development. 😁