Review Detail of TheprimordialGod in The rise of the Ultimate species

Hello author here! I would love some feed back as I’m new with terrible grammar I even had to search up how to do the the system status 😭btw don’t get let down by the op species they will need it and the laws of this universe are strong so it’s more difficult to destroy anything a rock here might be stronger than diamonds on earth and the future aliens are established in this op universe for billions of years so they are extremely, disgustingly op like im my vision is that they can pretty easy obliterate our universe if they were to exist here and the and the others at the bottom can destroy our planet with a punch or other crazy tech stuff.