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Rating: 4.4
Author: keith_playz

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2023-03-08 22:21

I would say the story was good upto 30 chapters then just went downhill but this is my opinion so others might view it good I feel like it's rushed I was hoping for more DC but it has gone to universe travel with gods servant reincarnators just making it boring and annoying for me you could have him go to different universe just act villainous but there's reincarnators my main problems is reincarnators this is my opinion you could take it as a joke everyone does anyway

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