The history is very interesting! It is a pity that it will not end, but anything can happen!))[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Looked pretty good until dialogue started and then it got to a point that I lost all interest, beyond the fact that she immediately claims to be a corrupted heroic spirit, which not only doesn’t exist in this universe but she tells a group of TEEN heroes that she’s corrupted after almost killing someone and expects that talks don’t go south…

sooooo... should i take eldritch survays or not?🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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Hmm I can say for sure this for sure I love this fanfic and it is one of the best of all fanfics i ever read # Grammar Check # Character development Check # Villain Mc Not An Beta Horny teenager Check Just one thing I dislike she is way too overpowered maybe try to keep power equal to most powerful people so that she is not totally invincible Other than that love this fanfic

The grammar, punctation and spelling was decent. The dialogue was alright, but some of the characters felt like they were being held at gunpoint to make irrational choices. The characters felt like 75% correct, but would make choices that had no rhyme or reason to them such as trying to capture then banish Artoria to the Phantom Zone after a brief discussion...ON Zeta Flight Space Station. Hawkgirl immeadiatly came over afterwards to inquire what went wrong and then scolds them for their irrational behavior. It was obviously set up to give the protagonist some sort of moral high ground or to bash on the heroes. I didn't really like it since although the Justice League makes questionable decisions sometimes, they'd never make a decision like that or at the least make such a decision after a brief discussion. 3.2/5 Stars. The books alright.

Take these 5's! Villaintoria ftw. I like how she's relatable still too.

I come here from Branwen. Anyway, It's good stuff