Review Detail of Xalysian in World Outlier

From the first two chapters I've read currently as of this review, this writing perspective kinda took me a bit to familiarise. I noticed some minor misspells that did stunned me for a bit and required some re-reads to understand them. This can be fixed with a little bit more time put on proofreading the work. Next, the dialogues are splendid as I could feel the tension in MC's voice however, I also noticed some lines that doesn't feel right in my mind. Maybe I'm just bad enough to read the dialogue but regardless. Story so far has been very interesting with the tragedy story involving MC. Character design are pretty good imo and as I said earlier, in two chapters, the world building could be a very interesting bit in the next chapters. I'm down to tune in for more, Author. You're reeled me in.